Do you ever fight with yourself?

In the earlier versions of my books, most of the conflict was internal, you read the main character’s thoughts as they struggle with decisions. However, most readers wanted more, so I added real action.

Here is a sample from “Roswell: First Contact”:
As Malcolm exited the ship, his heart began racing. His hands felt clammy again. I’m a private going to see a general. They’re never going to let me see him. I wish I could use the invisibility, but if I suddenly appear, they are likely to label me a threat and shoot first. I have to stick to the plan.

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Published by Tony B. Richard

Author of the Earth's Secret Alliance Series.

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